Karl (louderback) wrote,

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Some minor success

Today I added four chapters to Legion of the Star and Sun. Chapters are found at the bottom of the document. Click the link to expand the text. They are first efforts, but I am pleased overall with them. I think the revision they will need is more of the nature of "polish" — smoothness and flow — than structural revision. I expect I'll add some minutiae later, details to broaden the scope of events.

If you choose to look, please let me know what you like or dislike, especially the latter.

Writing is good for me. My mood has improved today and I feel more rested than I have in some time. I must say, though I could do with an afternoon nap on a day like today — cool (72°, sunshine, and a breeze). I think I'll go outside and read.


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